That was just beautiful. I thought it was quite true to character; believable. Well done.
This was just amazing. very nicely done..You could tell this meant something to them both, it wasnt just sex, it was very deep and meaningful. It can be difficult to get that across writing a sex scene, and you achieved that here. I enjoyed reading this.
I like it :D
Cute and Hot at the same time.
It's a beautyful and quiet romantic fic! :) I loved it!
I' m waiting for a new one!!!;)
OMG! Oh my GOD!!!! this is too much for me...! felt like i stopped breathing there for awhile :) hah! lovely!
OMG! Oh my GOD!!!! this is too much for me...! felt like i stopped breathing there for awhile :) hah! lovely!
WOW!!! could that get any hotter:) Overall, you certainly know how to write, keep it up...
First Michael/Sara fic I've read and I just have to say that was hot! Not too mention passionate and sweet.
It was a great fic and one of the best pure smut fics I've ever read. You've got talent for writing them if this is anything to go by.
That was HOT!!! No better word to describe it...very,very hot! Good job
This was my first time ever reading a Michael/Sara fic, and what a great way to start off! This was fantastic...And I could see this becoming a series of illicit affairs, no?
It was utterly fabulous. I loved it.
oh it was wonderfull great great fic
This was such a great and passionate story.... Great Job!!
That was so good!! is there going to be a sequel? please??! It was so cute and well written I loved your story!
its been awhile since i've read anything that good.
Beautiful...such a turn-on... Wow!
SO Intense... i can't believe how amazing their connection is, and this story! WOW!!!!!! we all love michaela and sara and want to see them together, keep the stories coming, they are really good!
oh
my
god
couldn't have been better!